This is the fourth sample article that conforms to the writing section requirements of the ECPE (Examination for the Certificate of Proficiency in English) of the University of Michigan. My first post to deal with articles , explains what needs to be present in the piece of writing candidates compose. Examiners are looking for articles that elaborate on ideas and have solid arguments; are well organized; make use of a wide lexical and grammatical range; have an original ring to them (in other words,
The following sample letter has been written so that exam candidates for a B2 level English examination (FCE now called First for Schools, ECCE, IELTS - 5.5 / 6.0, MSU-CELC, ESB, LRN) can get some ideas about how to organize and argue their writing.
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This particular question has been taken from an ECCE textbook which means that the rubric contains an introductory situation and then the question itself. The length of the sample letter that follows is approximately what examiners would expect to be completed in half an hour's time.
Here's the rubric:
Write a letter to Struggling with grandparents giving advice and offering suggestions as to what you think they should do to make living with grandparents easier. Start your letter: Dear Struggling with grandparents.
Dear Struggling with grandparents,
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This particular question has been taken from an ECCE textbook which means that the rubric contains an introductory situation and then the question itself. The length of the sample letter that follows is approximately what examiners would expect to be completed in half an hour's time.
Here's the rubric:
Dear Amber,
I have a problem with my
grandparents. They live with us and when I was little, I was happy to have
them around. Now, we have more problems. For example, they always complain
about my clothes and my music. They embarrass me in front of my friends by
treating me like a child. In general, they don’t seem to understand me at
all. I love my grandparents, but they are making my life really difficult!
What can I do?
Sincerely,
Struggling with grandparents
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Write a letter to Struggling with grandparents giving advice and offering suggestions as to what you think they should do to make living with grandparents easier. Start your letter: Dear Struggling with grandparents.
Sample Letter
Dear Struggling with grandparents,
Having
read about the difficulties you are having with your grandparents, I believe as
a 15-year-old with similar problems that I can help you with some advice on the
matter.
To begin with, there are some things
you can do to make living with them easier. First of all, try talking calmly to them,
without insulting them, and express how hurt you feel when they embarrass you
or when they look down on you, your music, and the style of clothes you choose
to wear. Try to remind them about how they were when they were your age, how
often they were upset when they did things others did not approve of, and how
they felt when they were treated like minors. In addition to this, try to turn
down the volume of your music when they are around – if they can’t hear it,
they can’t complain about it.
On
the other hand, you should also turn to your parents for help. After all,
they’re your grandparents’ children, so if anyone knows how to handle them, it
is certainly they. Explain to your parents that it’s their job to play the
referee between your grandparents and you, and that if they talk to them, your grandparents
will be more likely to listen.
All
in all, it is usually the case that grandchildren aren’t taken seriously
because most teenagers don’t spend time with older people. Were you to spend
time with your grandparents and let them get to know you, I’m sure they would
see you as an individual, with intelligence and a personality that ought to be
respected.
Yours
faithfully,
Jackie
Smith
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