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ECPE Writing - Sample Article (Banning Cars from the City)

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Ann Petry - Like a Winding Sheet (Overview - Part 3)

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Read part 1 of this overview which includes a brief introduction, includes a link to the full text of the story, some details about the author's life as well as an analysis of setting, plot.

Part 2 contains an analysis of the characters that appear in the story and the point of view. 


This part discusses the symbolism found in this complex short story.

Part 4 follows to discuss the themes and the title of the story.


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Ann Petry - Like a Winding Sheet


Symbolism

red lipstick
    • acts as a muleta (stick with a red cape of a matador -- Johnson is the bull in this case)
    • is the ultimate feminine cosmetic/ symbol of femininity
      • lips are colored to seem fuller (studies show larger lips are linked to higher fertility/ estrogen levels) + mimic red lips during intercourse
      • historically:
        • used to show social status, not gender (Ancient Egyptians)
        • worn by prostitutes + courtesans, later the upper class (Ancient Greece)
        • part of puberty rituals (Australian Aborigines)
        • until late19th century UK + US: unacceptable (was worn by actors + prostitutes)
        • exceptions: 16th century (during Queen Elizabeth’s reign) red lips were fashionable
        • end of the 19th century – start of the 20th century: became more acceptable to be seen wearing lipstick in public
        • conclusion: until 20th century, connection between lipstick + provocative/loose women
        • in the 1960’s = linked to femininity
    • if there’s one characteristic symbol that unites all female characters in this story it’s the mouth / lipstick
      • the one linked to male character = leg pain + fists
      • male + female symbols are highlighted through repetitive use
    • What do the lips / mouth / lipstick refer to in the story?
      • they remind Johnson of
        • the essence of women (attractiveness / sexuality)
        • their smugness / self-confidence
        • artful way to hide plainness / harshness (lipstick beautifies natural, unadorned lips)
      • Johnson’s vexation grows each time he
        • is reminded that women are able to delight in that which asserts their identity whereas he has to suppress what society dictates is men’s essential attribute (strength / authority / toughness)
        • hears women’s lips spew out nonsense / obscenities / insults:
          • Mae’s superstitious fears force him to have to persuade her to leave the house in the morning, which causes his delay
          • women factory workers snap and snarl when they’re tired at the end of the day
          • all women are bossy: Mrs. Scott: “You get in here on time.” ; coffee girl: “No more coffee for awhile.” ; Mae: “Come on, get up.” “… come on and eat…”
          • women are foul-mouthed: “nigger” uttered by his superior and his wife
        • feels humiliated because a woman doesn’t let him deal with his difficulties (by getting her own way / because he backs down)
          • Mae doesn’t show any sympathy for his leg pain in the morning; tells him to get up, get to work
          • Mrs. Scott doesn’t show any sympathy for his leg pain + inability to get started in the morning; puts him in the same boat as all men and reaches the peak of malice with “And the niggers are the worst. I don’t care what’s wrong with your legs.”
          • coffee girl (Note: her lipstick is scarlet – brighter shade of red) doesn’t allow him the pleasure of enjoying that which he sees soothes other customers: the forewoman’s racist remarks linger in his mind and poison his mind to believe that the girl is refusing him coffee on purpose
          • Mae (whose lipstick at the end of the story is dark red) doesn’t let him rest on the chair because she’d draped her overalls over the back of it
      • lipstick keeps his mind fixated on how women pamper themselves, hiding their bitchiness behind appealing lips: they stress their womanhood which further prevents his assertion of manhood (he has to accommodate them each time, because as he keeps telling himself, they’re women)
        • key sentence in the story: “He stood motionless for a moment and then turned away from the red lipstick on her mouth that made him remember that the foreman was a woman.”

winding sheet
    • shroud to bury the dead
      • symbolism behind this is that everyone -- regardless of social class, race, gender – wears the same clothes before God
    • is white: connected to the color scheme juxtaposed in this story (see further down)
    • Johnson is wrapped in the bed sheets that seem like a winding sheet to Mae
      • Mae links the sheets to death by calling the sheets a shroud
      • all he sees is his color enmeshed in the sheets: his color is stifled by the white of the sheets (white people): “ He looked at his arms silhouetted against the white of the sheets. They were inky black by contrast …”
      • Mae is giggling at this sight: subconsciously this must have remained with him throughout the day as yet another humiliation
      • the connection between death and his skin color wrapped in the whiteness of the sheets is a potent idea that whiteness is killing him

huckleberry
    • Mae calls him this when she sees him wrapped in the bed sheets: “You look like a huckleberry – in a winding sheet – ”
    • connotations this word has:
      • originates from 15th century phrase: “Something/someone is a huckleberry to one’s persimmon.”  = something or someone is slightly better than someone else (the huckleberry is smaller than a persimmon lotus)
      • the word itself connected to an ignorant person, someone who lacks ability
      • linked to sth insignificant, minor, humble
      • later connected to someone who is unimportant: Mark Twain used the word to ascribe characteristics to his character Huckleberry Finn (Twain stated he wanted to create a boy of lower extraction than Tom Sawyer)
      • “I’m your huckleberry” = I’m the man for the job: this could extend to imply that someone who’s a huckleberry is a stooge / whipping boy because they’re weak and inferior, just there to do a job and nothing more
    • conclusion: Johnson is reminded of his color, inferiority and insignificance by Mae

colors (white vs. black)
    • colors and race pervade the story, reminding Johnson of the inequality and gap between the powerful and the powerless
    • references to white
      • talcum powder Mae puts on in the morning
      • white bed sheets
      • “light colored slacks” forewoman at the plant wore
      • restaurant: “white porcelain topped tables”, “thick white cups” of coffee
    • references to black
      • darkness of the night that would help Johnson sleep (versus the daylight which prevents him from resting) is a time for toil + pain
      • huckleberry
      • inky black arms
    • for Johnson: white soothes, shows superiority; black is inferior, working-class
    • Note: other colors in the story = (for red, see above) blue tied to denim overalls and blue flame under the coffee urn; yellow housecoat Mae is wearing at the end of the story





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